fair, glad to see they were deliberate choices
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Amazing game overall, only nit-picking is that some of the dialog could've used a re-editing from a pro since tha cryptic tone you used can easily backfire, whereas the more straightforward parts like the scenes with the archfey are generally more effective in their narration.
Also, the 4th wall breaks, they're such a small part of the game you almost forget they're there but in the moment they definitely break the mood without really adding much to the experience, the only exception being the very last one in the finale.
Last but not least if you take into consideration anything from this comment for the love of god please add a gallery mode. your illustrations are simply gorgeous and definitely a highlight of the whole game. Your artstyle is just inspiring as a learning artist and it deserves to be appreciated on its own.
Don't have much else to say, regardless of any criticism I might have to give it's a splendid little gem of a game, 10/10, all round immaculate vibes. Seriously, you should be proud of your work.