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Saracenai

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A member registered Jun 09, 2020

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Well I'm glad my good faith offer was taken in the spirit it was meant. I might just do that. 


I'll just need to find it real quick. 

I've quite enjoyed this so far, but the one complaint I have is the writing. 


But not for the reason some might think. The plot and character work is pretty fucking solid.  But the flow of the writing is off.  Is the writer/creator perhaps not a native English speaker?


If that's the case, I understand entirely, and would just recommend you try and get involved with someone who can check to make sure the words flow a bit better. Hell, I'm a writer myself so if you wanted some free consultation on lines or how things flow, I'd be happy to help. 

Otherwise, I'm really enjoying the game so far.