I literally screamed when I saw the update just now! Omg I know what I'm doing tomorrow! Thank you soooooo much for continuing this!
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You're asking whether the ideals fit the world—but why demand this answer now, when the story is still unfolding? Instead of questioning if these values hold up, the real intrigue comes from exploring how they do, which is something that develops as the narrative progresses. Right now, the foundation is being laid, and patience is key to seeing how everything takes shape. The kind of scrutiny you're applying makes more sense for a finished story, where all elements have been stress-tested and fully realized.
If your goal is to contribute meaningfully, focus on being constructive rather than critical for the sake of it. A creator needs space to refine their vision—picking apart their work too early can stifle creativity rather than encourage growth. Premature harshness doesn’t lead to depth; it leads to doubt. Some storytellers stop creating altogether when they feel their work is being dismantled before it has even had the chance to breathe. Thoughtful critique should help shape a narrative, not shut it down before it finds its footing.
And for the record, this story is fantastic so far—Xaria has had me laughing nonstop, and I'm eager to see what comes next!
Xevvy, I love this story so friggin much! Tai's route was my first and I like it so much I needed to take a little break before I start reading another route because I felt wrong just redoing things without Tai lol. Is there any possibility of some kind of like Epilogue? Where we see how things are going for MC and their romantic interest(s) later on and how they're doing? I'm excited for Lukas' path at some point too!