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Very descriptive, and good sentence length, breakup and pacing, but perhaps a little over-flowery.
Comes across as more a storyteller talking, retelling of an old epic, than the sort of story that this usual for this medium.

Very descriptive, and good sentence length, breakup and pacing, but perhaps a little over-flowery.
Comes across as more a storyteller talking, retelling of an old epic, than the sort of story that this usual for this medium.

Theme is clearly addressed. 
Deals seriously with serious issues.
Usually nice/suitable BG music, although at the end I think there could be something more fitting.
Dialogue felt generally believable if a little too horny/flirty, even if some of that can be forgiven in the setting/circumstance.

Thank you kindly for the update. <3

Ty for the update. Finding out Almond was using his magic for naughty during the bow training. XD

Although this page shows the pc-zip as existing, the downloads page currently only shows mac/android.