I really liked it until the part where she finds the corpse. After that I have a lot of issues with it:
- I know the narrative needs us to hide in the shower, but from the player's perspective it feels completely arbitrary. There's no hint to it, the only way the player could figure it out is through coincidentally picking it or pure trial and error.
- The ending isn't decided by any of the dialogue choices you make that reflect Allie's character, but by a completely arbitrary choice that no reasonable person would have assumed would influence the story. Which, again, means the only way to find it is either coincidence or pure trial and error.
- The two endings were so similar that it feels like there was no real reason to even have the second one.
- There was no narrative weight behind Enide having killed & eaten Tabby. Even ignoring the fact that her being a serial killer & cannibal was already a huge enough plot twist that it easily overshadows this one, there was no reason for the player to have assumed she knew her at all, and the absence of letters was already explained by the fact that they moved multiple times & there was no way for her to know if they got them.
- The story ended really abruptly right after it felt like it was just about to begin. I don't know if this was originally supposed to be a larger game, but it very much feels like it.
(initially deleted because I accidentally commented instead of reviewed, but the review wouldn't let me copy & paste so here it is again)