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I have just one big problem right now... I cannot pass the clock puzzle because I cannot change the hands of the clock in any conceivable way. Do I use the mouse? The keyboard? I really don't know. Apart from this minor inconvenience, I look forward to continue to play.

It is not even funny. The context is very clean. I cannot even call it a subtext, because it is very in our face. What the heck!? 

When I see this kind of things happening I begin to think people have any consideration for the wellbeing of the people affected.

In fact, I have been working incognito on my own VN for some time because it deals with some heavy stuff and I'm afraid to be caught in a sh*tstorm.

I found this VN at random and I could not be happier with my dumb luck. All the deuteragonists are very well though. The overall quality game is very good. From the story to the small details such as UI. Keep the good work. 

She could be cross-dressing. And it is not a joke.

I kinda agree. Even without the dire circumstances taken into account, people do dumb things all the time.  Everybody makes crappy decisions even in favorable situations. People are imperfect, life sometimes sucks, and we navigate this mess the best we can.

For me, the MC has very good characterization. He makes me mad from time to time, but this is a good in my book. When this happens, I'm not mad with the writing of the character. I'm mad with THE CHARACTER. 

What I want to say is the MC from FBtW is not bad because he does dumb decisions, have shitty mood or any of the thousand things some people have been saying here as literary reasons to criticize the character. This not make a bad character or person. In terms of character, the MC is OK and servers the narrative very.

Criticizing and having an opinion are nice, and it is a very good thing to do if done properly. But there is a fine line between critique and rant (not in direct response, but about the overall thread of emotional tirades about the MC).  I'm working part-time on my own VN, and sometimes I see this kind of comments and regret my own decision.

 I have minor issues with the MC, but I enjoy it the VN so far.

I agree in part. I think there are ways to properly handle timeskips. Shorter timeskips work best for me and I think every timeskip should have sufficient exposition before and after to make the context clear. The timeskip we are talking about was kinda empty. If the MC had learned something or if hed did something of note to be explored later, the timeskip would feel far better.

That said, the demos sure very nice and the art is incredible.

I would like to thank GigaSaddle for the great VN. It is an enticing story, the characters are captivating and the  world building is mind-blowing. This is backed by the gorgeous artwork. I was already a fan of GigaSaddle, but this made have a greater appreciation for his work.  There some very good VN out there, but few impressed me in this way. 

Although I'm eager to dive more in the story (the naughty bits too), I understand that this craft take time. I'm happy to wait. Good things like this VN should not be hurried.

At last, if GigaSaddle read this, I would like to thank you. Because of this VN I regained my interest in Digital Arts and Storytelling I thought was dead.

As soon as I can, I'll try to give this masterpiece financial support. 

Again, thanks GigaSaddle.