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ngl im kind of obsessed with ashmedai

nevers my beloved D: 

AND WHAT IF I AM HOPELESSLY IN LOVE WITH A??? WHAT ABOUT IT??????

(i genuinley adore your writing, and the character development is just. mwah)

i am so in love with kal pls help lmao ... i love this so much btw :)

i love this so so so goddamn much... reminds me of 2020, when i was just barely a teenager and navigating my way through online friends, fandom, discourse, "love", and everything that comes with being in the actual fandom part of tumblr... made me feel so noostalgic in the best and worst kinds of ways. <3

this is so so so good i love it!!! reminds me of my bf and i a bit :] though that might just be because i made them after us- 5/5 stars !!!

i love this so so very much. i got the ending where you become a spider demon and roadtrip with gwyn and bec (i like to think that tam and mc are in a qpr :])

there are a few errors in grammar, the first being on the prologue page. the third sentence isn't incorrect, just odd to read. "gold is the meaning of which house they are from" also is a bit off, maybe change it to something like "the gold signifies their house" or "the gold shows where they are from." the options to choose hair length and color are also off, mostly with "bald scalp" "braid" and maybe "mohawk." i'd suggest changing these to "lack of" "braided" and something like "mohawked" "spiked" or even just "styled" hair. this might be an error on my part, but i'm not sure what you mean by "lick-ing"? maybe "liking"? this is on the same page as the hair options. you should also change "go" to "going",  and on the next page (if you choose the laughter option) you say "his brother" when i think you mean either "her brother" or "his sister." remove the comma in "living with them for a short time,".

otherwise, the colors look great and i love the story so far! keep up the great work :)

thank you for the support :) i'm glad you enjoyed !!!

thanks for telling me! i'll add that asap

i was just doom scrolling through the interactive fiction tag, as i do when i'm bored and dysphoric, lol.

this is so cool!!! and very relatable, even though our only similarities seem to be being trans and otherkin :) thank you for sharing your story!!!!!!

this game nearly made me cry. this is how i feel every day. quick rant: it probably sounds weird but i have something like phantom limb syndrome. for wings. even as i'm laying in bed right now im shifting around trying to get comfortable on them. yeah, i think im otherkin now that im writing this out. but my point is, this story is the first time i've felt seen. thank you.

as a cafe employee, accurate

i would die for xelef but i dont think he would appreciate that very much

great so far !!! one thing i noticed though: sometimes the pronouns mess up. so far i have selected myself, simon, and theodore to be guys, but i still see a few times where one of them or myself is referred to as her. thx

i got impeached on day 2! now to get immediately impeached... 

clearly you dont live in rural NC lmfao