This was amazing! I absolutely adored the computer interface and the conversation between the two leads. The play between them as they feel each other out was great.
Trying to parse through the difficult topic of self with the object one desired to be (if even for just a little bit) was fascinating, and even if the world presented was one that is uncertain and scary in the forces that seek to take and destroy, the little moments of warmth shown make them nothing but shadows on the wall.
This will definitely be on my mind for a long while, thanks for sharing!
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A doll on a quest to be a hero. A toy store with a tale of its own. Play nice!
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The second volume of a strange ark drifting out in space.
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A concept zine revolving around a strange ark out in space.
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An absolutely fascinating start to a relationship fostered on dolls and the childhood dreams concerning them. I cannot wait to see where things develop for our doll shop owner and her new friend (a certain lunch conversation was hilarious).
I think my only piece of criticism would be some more work in the GUI end of things, as some backgrounds against the white of the NVL and textbox did make things a little difficult to read here and there.
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