Man this would make a great TV series. I agree. However needs to be more polished and more options for the characters. MC needs to have more choices with the women he goes after and interacts with. Example, if he does not want to engage with Ash for instance, then there should be an option to do that in all the sex scenes. However you are forced to interact and given no choice.
I understand that it is only a Visual Novel, and that adding extra options can open to many other options. Yes I get that, however the MC is not a "brainless idiot" either and has been shown that he can make the "right" choices with Em during the whole story for example. I get that Ash is a "thorn" in his side, however she can still be knocked back for some of the sex scenes if you play the MC a certain way. Don't get me wrong I would love it if she too was a main love interest in this story as well. Would be fascinating to see her evolve and explore her line.
Still I love the story and all the characters and the time and effort for all the work that has been put into it and will continue to support it. I would love to see the story evolve beyond what it has so far. This can be an epic and in a way feel sorry for the writer because this can just keep going and going. There is so much to explore in this.
Thank you AZ for a great story and I look forward to every episode you put out.