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Amazing! The mechanics are smooth and the art is beautiful.

Thanks for letting me know! I must have mixed something up somewhere.

I love this! The wording, imagery, and music work really well together and fit with the theme. These elements create a sense of immersion and suspense that help hold my interest. My only critique is that some passages are a little long which can make them seem like more work to read. If you split them up a little, it would feel like less reading and give people a break in between. I would love to see the rest if you end up continuing it!

I agree with previous comments, the story and writing is really interesting and well done! I think giving the player a few more options throughout would be a good idea to help keep them involved a little more.

I love the feel of this, very creepy. Everything is very cohesive and fits the theme. My only suggestion would be to make the text a little bit bigger.

oops, the stats weren't supposed to be hidden. I forgot a bracket somewhere. It's fixed now though.

Really interesting use of imagery and language, they make it feel very immersive and bring the theme to life. The addition of humor adds a balance to the surreal atmosphere and keeps it fun. I played multiple times just see different results. I like the idea of the gallery, but I think only having it available after the player gets their result would be better so it doesn't spoil the outcomes. Great game!