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RiverCrow

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['Tears come to me eyes.'] in [Tears come to me eyes.][scene-aug-wrestle] 

me eyes > my eyes

['as soon as the buble bursts.'] in [The members put together are not worth h][inter-aug-trial]

buble > bubble

['"Wipe if off!"'] in ["Wipe if off!"][scene-sc-night2]

if off > it off

['bound to each others,'] in ["It wasn't all roses, especially when w][scene-sc-night3]

each others > each other

['That's a disgusting thing to say from a child.'] in [That's a disgusting thing to say from a][inter-aug-pet]

I think it's meant to either be "to a child" or "for a child"? (though I guess contextually "about a child" might be more appropriate?) 

['"Tell me is anything feels uncomfortable."'] in [The position allows me to snuggle up aga][scene-sc-night5]

is > if

['I'm about the feel really good I think.'] in ["I'm about the feel really good I think.][scene-als-check]

the > to, though this one could be in character :P

['It'll do you right on top of her.'] in ["It'll do you right on top of her. See i][scene-als-check]

It'll > I'll, I think?

['"You little junky."'] in [I catch her glancing at the dose of NT p][scene-sc-nt]

Junkie is the correct spelling, junky would be an adjective form, like trashy.  This honestly barely counts as a typo though, it's incredibly minor

['"That friend of mine you looked like you needed it for half the year,'] in ["That friend of mine you looked like yo][scene-als-walk]

Either "That friend of mine you looked like needed it" or "That friend of mine who looked like you needed it"


The typos were mostly fine, I think only like two of them actually gave me pause and the rest were too insignificant to be any kind of distracting, but the typo flagging gave the whole thing a treasure hunt sort of vibe and made finding them feel like a little extra treat :>

Honestly the writing flowed very well and the vast, vast majority of text was pretty much flawless. Massive props for all that.