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This has the potential to be something great! Looking forward to more!!

Wow. Just wow. I don’t think a VN has ever made me actually feel fear like the way this VN does it. This is one of the best VNs I have ever read, way up there with Adastra and Remember the Flowers. I love Loken’s tough guy personality but always makes me laugh when Alex pulls command out of nowhere and he just melts. Gets me every time. I also love Loken’s attempts to try and understand Alex. I can tell the creator of the VN has a creative mind, I can’t wait to see them do more!!

Day 31 and I'm witnessing Keisuke with no arms. When I say that I'm currently unable to breath from laughter, I mean it.

Got it, thanks for the info. I mean, it would be hilarious if that was actually part of the Darius’s Path. 

So, I'm playing Darius's path and I noticed twice now that Dozer has no clothes on except his underwear. Is that normal or is it a new style he's trying on that path? XD 

Oh! One more thing. I noticed that there's a couple backgrounds missing. Right now I'm looking at a cafe scene, but this is what I see. I hid the text to get a better screenshot. 

Makes sense lol. I guess it kinda threw me off with the way you designed the characters. Regardless, I like the VN. I might tackle the rest if I have the time.

I'm kinda curious about this, but why did you choose tennis for the sport they play? All the characters, or the team members look like they'd fit in with a football setting. I definitely like the VN so far. I played the Coach's route and now I'm on Spencer's. But, yeah I'm curious about why you chose tennis. 

I'm saying this now, but Ranok better come back unscathed. I just have the deep feeling that he's coming back injured. If he is, I'm throwing my laptop out the window in surprise and sadness.

Right?! I'm mentally prepping for that moment. Part of me wants Cole to just tell him because I want that father son bond to grow, but part of me want him to not do that because I'm worried Cole is gonna get disowned. 

I'M  NOT READY EMOTIONALLY!!! I STILL REGRET THE CHOICES I MADE WITH JUN'S PATH!

Oh, that magic.  XD

Healing Magic? Did I somehow miss a few parts of the novel???

Same, I wanna see Ranok come back! I have a very bad feeling that Ranok is gonna come back injured and I really hope he doesn't.

Yay! Funny thing, when I first saw the wolf I thought he was a bat. 

IKR? Like, I feel like the broken bottle is a bit excessive and yet fitting for the scene. 

I want to pet Chris's head. He's too fluffy for me.

Sorry if I don't quite understand where you got your info, but would you mind showing where it talks about the upcoming update? I'm kinda behind on the news lo

Is it just me or does Ilia scare anyone? The lady literally said she's killed a man or two back in her day...

I'm totally getting the same killer vibes from Zack too!!

Man, you guys sure know when to make someone jump with those nightmares. I like the story so, I'm looking forward to more of this

I'm using Big Sur. What it's doing is that it opens, but closes a few seconds later. 

MacOS version won't open for me, so if there's a fix being made, that's great. I'll use the Web Version in the meantime.

It's also not really the bad route but there is a split where it may end his route early I don't remember. Regardless, its more like a very dramatic and sad speed bump through the Jun's Good Route.

Oh my god, you will want to cry your eyes out and hate yourself for making that choice. I literally was flabbergasted when I chose.

YO, I AM NOT OK WITH JUN'S ROUTE!!

I JUST MADE A HORRIBLE CHOICE AND I HAVE TO GO THROUGH THE REST OF THE JUN'S ROUTE KNOWING I CHOSE THIS!!! (I still love the story by the way.)  Sorry if this sets up a spoiler, I don't know how to add that filter.

Oh, and one reoccuring typo is "oe". I don't know if its intentional, but its supposed to be "oi". 

Alrighty, I like this novel. I've already picked up on numerous easter eggs, some from different novels I've read and games I've played. I enjoy it, hope to see more from this novel!

I like the new Amicus sprite, just not the eyes. I prefer his eyes on the old sprite.

So, I just reached the part where Calean referenced Kemetian and I immediately connected that as an Easter Egg to Adastra with Neferu. Don't know if that was intended, but its the small things that peak my interest. I really love the storyline, so I'm looking forward to the 15th