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Good game. Love the story. However the seemingly random use of contractions is a bit off putting. Like I know that things like "I am here" instead of "I'm here" or "you do not" instead of "you don't" are grammatically correct, but it leaves an odd taste on the brain.

Will this one ever be finished?

I tried, I really did. But the dialogue is SOOOOOO BAD, I just can't.

Chasing Sunsets, u4ia, Race Of Life, Astreon, City Of Broken Dreamers, Desert Stalker, Melody, Artemis, Acting Lessons, Leap Of Faith, Long Road Home, Cosy Cafe, SWTA: Unbroken, SWTA: The Author, Mythos, Between Humanity, Ripples. Those are just the ones I've finished recently.  But prepare yourself with some of those if you're a soft hearted MF like me. 

I'd just like to say thank you for the game. That being said, may every pillow for the rest of your life be hot and lumpy.

The Book Of Eli reference...muah. Loved it.

Is there an explanation as to what happened to Floras body that I just haven't gotten to yet? 

Cause they don't want to ruin their game.

I thought we beat the Nazis. How did they get an iron grip on things again?

And fascism continues to rule the masses. 

So I've never gone through drug withdrawal before, but now that I've finished what has been released so far, I can at least relate. I wasn't ready!! I was just storming along and BOOM, done. I had to go for a drive. I didn't know what to do with myself.  

I always have my doubts going into a new game. But the humor has been pretty choice. Reminds me of a couple other top notch AVNs I've played before. I hope for good things to come.

So I literally just started. My dude MC just took a frying pan to the face and I choked on my Butter Rum Lifesaver. I'm in for the ride.

Jumpscare sold me, burned through it in a single sitting, let's go!!!

Ah, gotcha. Well too bad somebody can't make a simple mod to fill in in the mean time. 

Doesn't require VA. You could pull stuff off of the interwebs. Just some squeaks and whimpers and whatnot.

Will she ever make noise? Doesn't have to be much, just something.

So that's why so many of these games have you fill in the blanks on what the MCs relationships are once you get into the game on your own. I learned something new today.

Sweet. Time for my fix. I've been getting twitchy trying to find something else good to tide me over.

I have to stop playing these games. Between you and Caribdis I just can't deal with the emotional fallout when the game comes to an end. Thank you for helping to raise the bar for what a AVN is. But at the same time, I hate you so much.

Talked to Rae in the morning about finding ingredients but she still says she'll wake you in the morning?

I feel like I should start over and be taking notes. The dialogue needs some proofreading. "And others do know this too?" followed by "I guess many aren't."? That kinda hurts to read, sorry.

During the truck event on the beach there is a section of dialogue that says it was spoken by Linda but the way the scene went, pretty sure it was supposed to be spoken by the MC.

Seriously? Where are her freckles? 

Curse you for making all of these girls so adorable and actually making me care about them. Thank you and you suck. 🤣

It would be cool to see all of the humans that have been taken get finished in the completed game. I'd love to see the principal or whoever that is that's getting spitroasted get dumped on before you leave the room. Also I do hope the controller support gets an updgrade.