I ended up liking it quite a lot, at least it seems to me that it has a lot of potential what it wants to tell and the visual part, ie the design of the girls, I loved.
Even in a way I appreciate that it seems not to be rushing with the H content, because for how the main character is now I'm genuinely curious how that will develop, although the little glimpses either by the situation or the design of the clothes on the girls is appreciated.
I absolutely loved this game! The further I progressed, the better it got. I really hope they continue advancing the story, as that’s what intrigues me the most. I also really enjoyed the interactive minigames with Mia, Ruri, Laura, etc. They made interacting with the heroines much more fun. My urge to make the "right" choices made me replay certain parts until I figured out exactly what to do.
My only issue was some inconsistencies in the dialogues based on the choices I made. For example, at the beginning, if you don’t defend Emily, you’ll see a scene where Ruri immobilizes you by sitting on your face.
The story references that scene even if you haven’t seen it (if you defended Emily). For instance, when the protagonist tells Rea that the girls took advantage of the immobilization, or when Ruri says it’s normal for the player to avoid her after everything she has done (even though nothing had happened with her yet). Later on, Emily even mentions that Ruri wanted to sit on your face, and the player thinks, she already has.
In my playthrough, I chose to defend Emily, so those comments felt out of place until I thought to see what would happen if I chose the other option at the beginning and I connected the dots. A similar inconsistency happened when I hugged Mia, but later the protagonist told Laura that he had kissed her.
Another thing I want to highlight is that after the warning about the nonlinear section, Emily and Laura’s models improved when interacting with them. I loved Laura’s new model, but Emily’s felt like a strange upgrade, maybe because her frown is now much more noticeable. I don’t know how to describe it, but her face looks more plastic-like, whereas the previous version seemed cuter to me :v
But overall, I’m loving everything about the game! I really hope to see more of the story since I’m hooked on finding out what happens next—and not just because I want to see more H-scenes with the heroines XD
I think I already said this when I played Chapter 1, but this has been truly incredible. It quickly became one of my favorites, and with Chapter 2, I can only reaffirm that. I loved it from start to finish. Honestly, my only fear was when the in-game day ended, thinking that the version might already be over.
Also, thanks for the Spanish translation, which is the language I speak (this is translated with ChatGPT :v). It has quite a few minor errors, which still get the message across but make it read a bit oddly—mostly grammatical mistakes and similar issues, as well as some phrases that would require an equivalent in Spanish rather than a direct translation.
I’m mentioning all of this because I actually took the time to gather the grammatical errors I found in a save file, and I wanted to know if there’s any way I could send it to you—just in case those parts of the translation can be modified—so that it reads more naturally for Spanish-speaking players.
Maybe I could send the save file along with a text document suggesting how the text should be written, or something like that. I’d even try to modify it myself if I knew how :v
Sorry for the long message. I’ll be eagerly waiting for the next update! 10/10
I really liked this game. I loved the designs, animations and gameplay. As a scene completionist, I struggled a bit with which options to choose. I'll hold off on this for now and stick with the route I built in my game and leave trying other options later. A very good game without a doubt, I enjoyed every moment.
I loved it, but really, everything feels like it was well done, it's been a long time since I loved this type of games, both for their artistic section and for their plot and characters, really a real gem that I didn't expect to find even though at the moment there is only chapter 1. I will definitely look forward to seeing how this develops.
Thank you very much again for taking your time to respond.
Even in that version nothing happens apart from washing the dishes with liryel normally, Cait and El are only in the library separately (except to advance Lyriel's story in this version), nothing that indicates the progress of the Useful missions Elf or Deeper Relaxation or Manga Research, maybe it's up to me to save that something happened accidentally, later I will try again in a new save
Thank you very much for responding, this is my save
https://www.mediafire.com/file/2i9fec19nrk1w1r/saves.rar/file
I can move my save to the latest version and continue with the game without having to restart, right?
