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While I have been enjoying the update, I have a gripe with the Felicity storyline. The events that happened in the update where the dad tricks the MC seem a little too easy as the MC has been tricked multiple times in the story with several different events and has not really learned to take more precautions at all. The whole Felicity agreeing to go with them seems out of character for how much she has developed since leaving her father. Plus with the most recent Lin story, we know that there are places where the cast can sneak off to if trouble does arise. Also, the fact that Stoneface pulls a gun on the MC and the android does nothing to stop him seems a bit weird since it is not like the android can not fight or would be significantly harmed by bullets. Overall, what I am trying to get at is the fact that for the father to do something all the sudden and also get what he wants so handily without the cast having any initive seems more contrived. Especially since we are going to wait for an update before it goes somewhere. Plus Lin and other stories have shown that violence is not something that the cast can or will not participate in, especially when they are facing a crime boss and not a the law. I kind of expected a better reason as to why Felicity would be forced to go with them like a kidnapping rather than blackmail, as we are housing revolutionaries that are willing to fight people

I'm personally thrilled that you are moving it to Steam. I've felt recently that Patron was moving away from supporting 18+ due to its negative reputation. I mostly don't use Patron for 18+ content because it is much closer to their cutting room floor than other TOS gray areas within Patron. It's also the same reason why I did not want to support through Itch either.

It is a real shit thing Patron did to you, but I hope you can transition your support from Patron to Steam as smoothly as possible. While I did not think this story was a Shakespearean masterpiece, you still deserve to have your voice heard by others and judged so without the fear of censorship and the loss of your livelihood. 

When you manage to shift CK to Steam, I hope I'll be one of the many who show up to support this project as I have already gained tons of enjoyment out of this project without paying a dime. I wish you the best of luck in the future as this sounds like a difficult time for you, and know that there is a large amount of people who want to see you succeed.