waow there is literally so much i could say about this title and i can't wait to start journaling my thoughts! but what an amazing piece! the mechanics are simple but engaging- make it a bit easier to get through than a pure vn, but i would have stuck around for the story all the same.
my only gripe would be wanting a more detailed route for hugh and fanny as well, but the author notes (great addition!) address this and the peyton route is so obviously the heart of the story that i'm at peace. i think i just want MORE of this because it's so original and intriguing, but the length of the final product feels right.
- love the fairytale-esque structure here, but with a western setting! i see frankenstein in here as well and some classic fairytales that i can't get the titles of to come to mind right now, but this is an extremely fresh story- such a joy to see all the plot threads tie together and the pathos of the story shine through
- loveddd reading this as a story of the way that trauma changes who we are forever, and that new self, even if rejected by the people once close to us, is still worthy of love, a fresh start, and the freedom to let go of the past and move on with your life- that shared thread between the girl and peyton makes their relationship sooo beautiful and so believable.
- peyton is a slam dunk of a character and while the ending screen of him and the girl made me teary, the scene where the girl finally says "no" and then peyton, elated, tells her to say it again and in general constantly facilitates the development of the girl's autonomy- it's enough to bring a girl to tears!! wow!! probably the moment that will stick with me the most!!
- the prose is sooo good- love the brevity on display here and loved the centering of text- definitely added to the impact of the script. the illustrations are beautiful as well. i'm not art-minded, so the right words elude me, but the way they were utilized and framed stood out to me as well- i could see that shared principle between the text and the art. i see the vision and i loved it!!
i could and will say more in my personal notes but wow!! so glad i stumbled across this gem and i will be recommending it to everyone!! can't wait to play the rest of your work and looking forward to your next project!!