Great start! I can't wait to see where the story goes! Some images and interactive variables could improve this!
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i love how this game is like a puzzle!! The first three choices needing each other in order to access the other options is creative! Though there are some loops in the game, where you're just stuck on 2 pages;; I would have to manually go back. The storyline is suspenseful, amazing writing! I can't wait to play the finished version!
The story is very interesting.. i love me some drama. Very descriptive! i love getting to know the characters and their backstories! Though i feel like i'm just reading a novel, since the choices so far are just backstory and information. I think some interactive choices|different endings would be fun!!
I LOVE BEING EMPLOYED!!!!!!. I've so far only played two routes, and they're both COMPLETELY different from each other which i really enjoy. The new dialogue based on the choices was entertaining! The only feedback i have would be to change the output of the game, since i couldn't read the rest of a choice due to the size of the game. Other than that amazing work!!!