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Yeah now that I think about it, shooting and aiming should be done with the same keys. Thank you for playing!  

I would say the game definitely requires a tutorial - it was very hard to figure out in a short amount of time. That said, the concept is very interesting!  

Pretty cool game! Very easy to grasp and enjoyable 

Now that I think about it, that does make sense; Tension wise definitely, I should have put the Pines before, but even in terms of worldbuilding, earlier introduction of the Pines would work better. This jam has been a very good learning opportunity lol 

Thank you for playing! I remember thinking that I had to fix that, but I guess I kind of forgot lol 

Thank you, glad you have enjoyed it! I will be checking out your game shortly :)

Haha I guess that is the case. In my opinion, things get very disorientating at the end of page 1, and page 2 largely makes it more confusing; because of how fast paced the narrative is, that is, perhaps, accurately representing the feelings of the characters in that moment, which is good, but as a reader I struggle to put myself into an environment and with people I cannot imagine. I feel like that is especially the case when writing things that are different from "traditional" fantasy and include things that might be new to reader, because of the total lack of meta grounding at that point

Loved the mysterious feelings this evokes! The descriptions and the dialogue felt very dynamic and fast paced. I struggled just a tiny bit to follow the story on the first read though, I think it was too dialogue heavy for my liking and I did not have enough "grounding" in the environment to properly visualize the world; I do believe that is just a personal preference, though, and overall I really enjoyed reading it! I think it has a lot of artistic value, and does a great job at showcasing the characters 

This was very pleasant to read! The words and descriptions were easy to follow, and I could almost see the apartment and the snowing streets. It very nicely fits the melancholic vibes (at least, that is what I was feeling. Maybe bittersweet is a better word for it?) in the middle of the story, with the cozy, heartwarming feelings by the end of it. I felt the transition from the conflict to conflict resolution was a bit abrupt, but that is perhaps because of the word limit,  or just my personal preference for reading the inner monologues lol. 

Overall, I think you are really talented and I really enjoyed reading the story! Would love to read more of your works! 

Thank you very much for the detailed comment! This was my first story and your feedback helps a lot. When adding the Pines in that moment, I was trying to give the character some "grounding"; otherwise, I would have felt like Crub agreeing to become a hero would be somewhat unjustified within the story, since up to that point I had only focused on showcasing that it was chaotic and dangerous, but now that I read it again it does feel out of place... 

I will definitely work on restricting the pride; I personally really like long descriptions of stuff, but I definitely need to work on integrating actual story into it.

Again, thank you for the detailed reply!!!

Thank you, I am glad you liked it!!

Main character is so cute! Love the gameplay loop, it is simple but very engaging. Good job!!!

Thank you very much!!!

Haha thank you, did my best with the animations; the text problems are very unfortunate, I changed the font in the very last moment so I did not have time to check properly :(

Thank you very much! I got a bit lost with all of the UI and and stuff, that sounds like a great addition :$

Pretty cool concept, and very nicely made, especially given the constraints of the jam. Good job! 

Dam I forgot, sorry about that. Just gave you a rating! 

Cute game, simple and engaging :)

Thank you very much, I was a bit unsure of the writing but I am glad you liked the events! There were originally supposed to be way more of them and a whole arc with an infection but I ran out of time so badly lol 

Thank you! Now that i look at the text it does look small, I changed the font from default at the very last moment and forgot to check how it would look :\

I do not know why, but this is so incredibly comforting. I loved the game, and I will definitely be returning to it at some point

The game is absolutely GORGEOUS, absolutely loved the character designs!!! Very impressive given the time limits of a jam

The art style is so peak, the pigs turned out very cute :*

I love the art style so much, the pigs are really cute and there are so many customization options. The chicken game mode is also very interesting and engaging despite being simple. Overall, loved it, has to be one of the most creative projects in the jam  

p.s. 10/10 would gamble again 

I struggled a bit with the perspective, but overall it is pretty engaging. Great job!

AI generated :/ 

I got jumpscared by a frog, 10/10 experience would recommend 

Pretty interesting gameplay loop. I think there is some error with the spots for the pigs - when I return them back to "hand", the spot remains occupied and I can't place anything there. Overall it is really interesting :&

Thank you! This was my first experiment with isometric art, so some things are a bit clunky still. Very happy that you have liked it!!! 

Omg I love them!!! Great assets!

Thank you so much!! 

Hehe crazy is what I was going for! Thank you for playing! 

Thank you very much!!! Yeah, that visual bug with the panels is the bane of me xD, tried fixing it before the submission period ended but to no avail :(

Interesting game! Wish it had some more game juice, but overall I like the effort, good job! 

This is a VERY nice game, I enjoyed playing it a lot! The rhythm mechanic is very fun and has a lot of potential. Very nicely done game design and great job! 

Thank you!!!

Thank you very much! Yeah I encountered that bug as well, but did not have time to fix it unfortunately lol. Had to choose between keeping the pretty animations and the bug, or removing both :(

Thank you very much!!!

Hehe thank you very much! This one was somewhat of an experiment, so I am very glad you liked it :)

Nice game! Love the creativity :)