Hi Developer,
First of all, thank you for your hard work. This is one of the most immersive NTR VNs I’ve ever played. It has left a deep impression on me and provided great stimulation. I have a few suggestions I’d like to share:
- Regarding Tropes: While traditional "pure smut" NTR—where the female lead (FL) quickly turns into a mindless "sow" or becomes purely addicted to the antagonist—has its uses, it’s becoming less appealing. These "intelligence drop" plots often feel a bit "silly" or unrealistic unless the CGs and sexual descriptions are exceptionally top-tier.
- The Protagonist’s Role: I’m the type of player who enjoys the thrill of NTR but dislikes seeing the protagonist (the cuckold) portrayed as a total, pathetic loser who ends up in a miserable state or even dies. In story-heavy games, I tend to empathize with the protagonist. While I enjoy the eroticism, I still fundamentally disagree with the antagonist's (the "yellow hair") actions. I know "bitter" endings are classic, but I prefer a bit more nuance.
- Female Agency: I prefer seeing an FL with strong agency who grows with the story. She might "fall" sexually, but she should remain mentally mature or even become more cunning. The "sow" trope feels too objectifying and lacks initiative. I think a twist where the FL ends up pulling the strings and controlling the whole situation would be brilliant.
- Current Progress: I’ve reached Chapter 8, and I’m really enjoying the subverted tropes and unexpected plot twists. It’s been a very refreshing experience.