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right after you search Syliva's apartment the you have, "mc quickly grabbed" instead of "[character name] quickly grabbed". During apartment search on of the texts is too long and is cut off at the end by the bottom of the text box.

noice

ngl the writing at the beginning of chapter 4 is very rough, who is talking to who? The characters cut each other off and start new sentences and they don't flow into each other. Its like an ai wrote all of this tbh.

breeding in the future?

your pumping out updates aint no one really waiting, cuz were being fed.

Ravager, Hypnosis, Raven's Quest, Dungeon Slaves(Hyper Meme)

Love the New Daphne look! Saw her get killed in Companions of Darkness! XD

wow you release an update like every 3 weeks ill comeback at 0.20 an hopefully my 2 star review will be updated to a 3 (which is what i call average) KEEP ON MILFIN!

almost seems like it is abandoned

you get a babies made stat card too

town of magic is just like this game btw

holyshit its a Christmas miracle

its been so long since late game update was thinking you just threw in towel

monday night she streams

As a killer bass you can bone every last female teammate +gwen :3

dude Im loving the new character models hopefully down the line you can update older chapters!!!!

0.8 doesnt work with old saves?

yo on the broken watch ending with Laura you messed up the Peg issue. remember she is the one that sent the p-test in box right? so you should have her admit that she sent the test and was P from then . not from the most recent meetings. Also she and haley should be showing hella by the end end.

why the 4th wall break with Topaz?

technically this is better than hypnosis, but i find it a lot less interesting. Anyone else feel that? Also love the Companions of Darkness refence, gave my Slef the Nickname Rule B, LOL

shes got lizard skin and lizard eyes

Why does Haley look green? aka why is she a Lizard woman?

theres also an instance where ash and mc talk about doing it again before doing her for the first time in mc's car. Also before meeting laura in diner mc is constantly said to have the watch when he does not.

after laura incident in gym talking to daphne MC says he pulled out watch when he did not he used phone and larua used the watch. Also during talk MC said he was thinking why they all still follow his commands, well its because he asked Ashley's subconscious this morning and she told him lol. Its odd how many inconsistencies are starting to pop up in later chapters

when you meet 5 of the girls in the gym mc talks about daphne but says Laura commanded daphne when it was mc?

at the end of grace time at house MC says he's gonna leave then grace asks him to leave then he says hes gonna leaven then in away like she hadnt just asked him to leave, shes tells him to leave again, its just a broken part of conversation lol

yo during talk with grace at her house she says Pobody's perfect instead of Nobody's perfect

during the hospital scene at the radio part with mara and emilly you got their dialog all messed up and emilly was talking mara's lines. also the pause and save buttons do not work. (public version)

lol but its funny as fuck i guess you could try goblin layer?

downloaded on patreon cuz it wasnt up here yet. very good chapter nopefully u update mc's face cuz he kinda ugly. Its literally the only negative of the story! Hopefully you release lots of content next year!!!!

guess the site is still updating.....

his save is also lost in the rift

holy fuck the characters contantly talking about being OP is so FUCKING ANNOYING! fucking breaks the fourth wall in a bad way dude.

plans for actual breeding or only going as far as creampie mating press?

read the paper left to right click stones in that order..... super duper ez

considering how the main plot of the story came about. MC coulda just blown ministers brains out can called it a day instead of pistol whipping him.

i guess i was thinking more like gas station bathroom but i guess the park has that covered.

parking lot in badlands i mean they being exhibitionists' so places like that and forest would always work

sorry i mean the public pool but i can see why they wouldn't go there. But maybe the beach? guess a super skimpy bikini would need to be added? lol

thanks! Im surprised you cant take her to the bar/hotel/pool/gas station/Parkinglot