This is so cool, I've never seen a VN animated like this! I really hope you guys continue making it cause it's really unique and interesting so far.
The english translation is also good, but some sentences are a bit... lengthy? Too descriptive? And it ends up sounding a little unnatural/stiff in some places.
Lastly, more on a technical side, I do wish this just came as a normal archive that I can extract somewhere once and then just play it from there, instead of the game extracting and deleting itself every time.