This was so cute!!!
Red_Sorceress
Recent community posts
The mouse was very hard to control; I had to keep resetting my position. My other main issue was that, at the end, I could not figure out where the wife was, and I thought I was supposed to use the key on the safe or shoot the lock. It took a while, but I managed to beat it. I brute forced my way through it because the story was a good one with an important message. Plus, the visuals were nice!
There's lots of words missing, like "fazed"and "nerdy". I think there should be an indication that a word will not be accepted instead of us having to guess. Also, the submit button is right next to a giant hit box to add new letters, so I kept making words longer on accident and ruining it. Otherwise, this is a neat concept and pretty fun!
This is coming along nicely! I will just say that the perspective shift to Dima's POV is a bit abrupt and confusing. It could maybe be remedied with a transitional title card saying "Meanwhile, across town..." or something to signal that we aren't looking through Amelyn's eyes anymore. Looking forward to the update.