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Hey, thanks for checking it out. If you find that you wish there was something in here that isn't let me know and there is a really good chance I'll add it!

This looks really neat. The elegance of the design almost begs for someone to start writing.

Thanks for the comment! I definitely went back and forth on the lore. In fact there is an error another reader caught where I had a journal from a previous dungeon inhabitant that explains more about the moonchild. I took it out because I couldn't quite get it right.

Thanks for the comment and taking the time to look through the adventure. I went back and forth on the idea of really fleshing out the dungeon or leaving it as a mystery. I think you're totally right that it will turn some GMs away and attract others.

Finally getting back to you, sorry for the delay. Thank you for the compliments and noting that the emptiness is a feature. The journal was something I was experimenting with to add a little more lore to the dungeon, but then it just felt wrong, and I forgot to get that last bit out!

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Haha, glad you got a kick out of it!

Thanks! I'm really glad you liked that bit! I hope that it creates a whole moment where the party has to stop and make some tough decisions.

Aw shucks! Thanks for the compliment. Don't tell the rest of the group. I don't think you all escaped yet :)

You gave me the nudge I needed to put this out there. So thank you again!