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Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate hearing feedback for the script as this is my first time writing, I'll keep these points in mind for coming update and future projects~!

I may or may not have switched out a letter on an actual store's name xD I'm glad you noticed! 
Haha yeah basically like recent anime titles that explain everything in the title, still made sure to still incorporate some surprise to the story.

I'm really glad to hear it made you laugh, that's honestly the best!
Appreciate the feedback so much! Much love~!

I mentioned this earlier in the Light.vn Discord, but I love how pretty and well put together this is! The usage of the single scene from a first character perspective with Amanda's reaction in the textbox is so clever! Since there is such nice depth in the scene, all I feel like is missing is some slight camera movement from the train moving, making use of some parallax effect. The blue and orange is such pretty colors!
Music is very pleasing and gave a nice rhythm while reading.

I was very into the story, I managed to get 4 endings I think, my first being the "neutral" ending xD I won't spoil anything but I was getting more curious as the story progressed on what the truth behind these characters are. Especially the male character I'm still a bit unsure of, I would love to play this again once all endings are finished to find out more about the setting~! ^^  I def wanted to go out partying with the devil girl but that might just be me haha

Oh thank you so much! I really appreciate the feedback TT and I'm so happy you enjoyed the story! It's cool that you noticed such details as the star hair pin (even I forgot it at times haha). and I hope you'll like the details I'll add as I'll finetune and render the art out more for the coming update(s)! Much love and thanks for the support!