Thank you for the feedback! I definitely agree the transition feels a bit jarring where I left it in the Author’s Note. Moving it back to the Further Reading probably would've flowed better!
Thank you again for checking out my adventure!
Ditto! The player facing map is a simple but wonderful inclusion, and the entire dungeon is written succinctly while still maintaining personality. Feels like it would be a smooth run for a DM.
Also, I would hang that Table of Contents on the wall. That page is seriously beautiful (especially paired with the last letter from the hero King).
Incredibly well done.
Ran this last weekend as a one-shot which has now spun into a miniature campaign. Evocative idea, incredibly tight graphic design (definitely implemented the best ideas from Haunting of Ypsilon 14 here), and super fun adventure which is easy to run and can surprise even the Ref. Highly, highly recommend.