Hi there! I'm still playtesting a lot of this since there's so much content, but some initial feedback/questions I have would be: 1. I'd suggest adding a card for explaining the rules for things you've added like the Ancient Whispers token. I only just recently saw that those rules were here on the itch.io page, but having a quick way to access them mid game would be preferable. 2. For John White's backstory, "If you reduced to 1 Sanity on wilderness or expedition space then discard this card and gain the Cowardice Consequence", does this mean specifically if you are reduced to 1 Sanity while on a wilderness or expedition space or does it trigger if you have 1 Sanity and then move onto a wilderness or expedition space? 3. The "When Doom advances to zero, Investigators lose the game" text on the Eschaton Epoch ancient one is cut off.
That's all I've noticed for now. My group is having a lot of fun with these cards though! We're really impressed by the amount of content you've added and how it fits in perfectly with the overall theme and tone of Eldritch Horror. It practically feels like it could be an official expansion from Fantasy Flight!