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Agree that the prologue/setup with jayce actually hooked me in quite a bit, then when you get into the MC's pov the experience nose dives.

Turns out it's much more interesting watching Jayce lust over the IDEA of the MC, rather than actually watch the incredibly horny/immature/overconfident yet extremely insecure MC flounder through the most awkward train ride handjob I didnt even want to take part in. Not sure why the game has choices when the MC has to be the biggest horndog nerd possible regardless.

Author is clearly capable of writing a decent enough/interesting character with Jayce, his obsession and perversion is explained and a requirement, but the MC is so slimy and 'rapey' I turned the game off as soon as they got off the train.

It's definitely a sore spot on the story. Very difficult to believe the MC wouldn't hear from SOMEONE for months on end. Feels very forced, hopefully its wrapped up soon and we can actually start dealing with the situation properly.

Still like the story, but can't help but disagree with the twist. Throws so much off.

I really like it. Normal well made horror game with grounded dialogue despite the nudity and whatnot. Definatly keep that up, helps separate from the 1000's other horror games.

 I know its just a demo essentially but I'd love to see a bit more length in future chapters. The graphics are great and the walking animations are not too bad at all but the start of the walk and the turning are quite stiff.

Also maybe add a camera zoom in feature? Just something I was wanting while playing but I could see why you dont add it.

I've subbed on patreon as well but I'll echo Channeiras point about a lower tier. $7.50 a month is a bit high for myself.

Good Job!