Thank you! I'm happy that the journey came across as I had intended.
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The jazz harmonies and groove in 'Old Town by the Coast' and 'Haunted Island Boardwalk' aren't overwhelming but are really quite tight and impressive - I think it shows a lot of skill to get it sounding so comfortable and naturally groovey! 'Creature from the Water' feels chaotic as intended but I think it was a little tough to listen to it - the dissonance is quite long. 'By the Shore at Dusk' and 'Ferry Ride' are great at keeping all the ambient textures fresh and still moving.
The unique tunings in the harmonies are amazing. I love the pauses in Repose and how it helps the listener really digest each element of the track. I think that you do a good job expanding on the main motif and riffing off it with countermelodies (especially in One Summer Night) but since most of the tracks are very ambient/looping it would be nice to add more key motifs interacting with each-other. The drop in Apotheosis is my favourite part - just as the detuning starts to feel too disorienting everything comes together in this scary but composed way. Nice job!
I really like the bird sounds and the combination of synths in 'that cloud looks like a whale'. I think it could benefit from some added texture, maybe some filters fading in and out? I can hear some panning but longer form variation in the sound might help create the ambience you're looking for. 'Quest for purpose' has a good dance groove and solid melody. A tight bass line might make it even more groovy. The atmosphere and vibe between both tracks feel both nostalgic and determined which is pretty neat.
