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so there is a small bug in the replay scenes. the chest makes you a boy if you didn't pick that

So I will say this is a very solid second game, I do like that there are characters now with red butts and time to heal. You have definitely made some great work and honestly I give this game a 4/5

That being said I like the different implements and sounds and like i said the red butts. On a personal level I wish i could have seen scenes with panties down, but on a professional level its a very solid game and i know its difficult to implement what is there. So dont take what i say in a bad way, really good job on this second game


Only Bug I found at the time of typing this was the green mirror in the library, it black screens everything and so i have to avoid it
*EDIT*
The Basement at the end is also a black screen but the scene is on an endless repeat

So I finally got around to play this game and i have to say I was a let down.

Don't get me wrong the animations and art were amazing, and I know its very very difficult to do any of it at all.

But with the lack of spanking positions and implements made it feel like there was no love for that. The lack of panty choices and luck of colors also was a let down. And I know I shouldn't compare it to justiciar but that had a lot more color choices to it , and who knows with this new system it could be tricky to change the MC's idk. Also I don't get the sub/dom/brat system, like it was introduced and then killed off? In OFTA2 it was the same thing, not do be a shit head by saying this but why have if it is for nothing?

However even with all of the the thing that killed it all for me was the 40 second loads when setting up a team for a exploration. It slowly killed my interests in the game that I never bothered with doing the Dragons lair, so I have no idea how this game is supposed to end.

All in all 2.5/5

So here is my honest review and suggestions

This game is amazing for the fact that on release it was fully done, as other who post their stuff on AOTK who do it in small parts, and then give up. So big gg on that. Secondly I love games like this where you don't have a single questline and can only do that. Very much enjoyed what "side quests" there were and how it shaped the ending. So all in all great game for a first ever 

-A suggestion I have is during spanking for the MC is they can be bratty or compliant when spanked, as too add more spankings or just fun dialogue

-I know its your first game but with the mirrors I was expecting to look at the characters butt and the red they would have, I know this is difficult without a dedicated artist or in this case AI gen, but it would be nice

-It also would be a good idea to add a pain level, don't get me wrong I enjoyed all the times the MC got into trouble for fun or punishment, but it felt fake knowing the amount of spanking in one day and she walked it off like nothing happened.

-I feel like there was a missed opportunity for more punishments for the farm daughters, Like being the tutor and having them have chances of messing up in tutoring or arguing with each other etc.

Bugs

-The hand over the coat to the inn. I get the feeling it shouldn't be repeatable but it is.

-The book you get from the one lady (trying not to spoil) you seem to get an infinite amount by clicking the chest

Otherwise like I said amazing first game and look forward to anything esle you might make

Yes any time after that game if i pressed back or used the mouse scroll or loaded a save after the game. it just goes to the beginning of the game

Hey so i was also going to post this in your discord but i also have this issue where im at the point of just skipping over the gem game cuz what he described also happens to me. any point after the gem game if i got back (at any point save or not) it takes me back to it. and i also uninstalled and reinstalled and it still does it.

But i also just wanted to also say im glad this vn/game isnt dead, i loved it when i played in 2023 and am glad its back

Idk if it has been addressed but the exhibition event with the duke is bugged and freezes the game when you say yes

Itch made an update a while back making it no able to be used by mac

This was a great preview. I enjoyed it and am sad there is only so much. But look forward to future parts

Also i agree with the other review more spanking games are always welcome

He said in the discord that unless it is a bug he can fix everything is done. They will be taking a break and will be coming back with a new game and engine so look forward to that

Def an interesting take on the usual npc mc interactions. I definitely will watch this progress closely, looks like it will be a fun game

Obviously balancing will happen but for now it takes way too long for the angry meter lol

This is for anyone new who comes across this game. This game is done and will more than likely not be updated. The game in its self is enjoyable albeit limited. There is a total of 3 repeatable scenes and obviously all the monster scenes as well. As far as the romance is concerned it has only two small romance bits. And in my opinion the "mansion" is the only good one. Still even with the cut content it was very enjoyable so i recommend one or maybe two play throughs

awesome if you can if not ill just stick to closing the game and coming back in :) lol

which btw idk how to fix it but the bar maid is stuck in the conner position and i am now soft locked whenever i enter the bar

So i came across this game by complete accident, for some reason when i typed the spanking tag this gem never showed up. Honestly i love this game and the direction it is going, and look forward to update and to see this game and you as a creator grow. As a person who prefers spankings over sex acts this game is perfect in that. How ever you choose to go forward with the story will def keep me in anticipation 


ED: Only thing i would like added is a load button and maybe if a corner time convict tried to escape to add more to their spankings but other wise solid game and looking to more