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Yayyyy

I meaaaan Violo and Vivere are cute and nice the Stockholm syndrome got me lol

Oooooooh! This was so good and cool, and good! Everyone is just so likable and different and I just can't wait for more

Holy cow, that cliff hanger hit me like a truck! Like I came out of a heartfelt moment and then bam boom! Now I just have to play the full game after that! (Personally, I am really excited to see Lion's and Kie's routes, they're both just way too cute :D)

Damnnnn that cliff hanger-

No problemo, glad I could help :D

Oh, this story already piques my interest! Even right now, the characters are really well developed, and I can really feel the emotions of each one. The Nanny and the Guard characters are definitely my favorites so far. And I can't wait for more, as well as learning how the heir comes to be as a person :)

The only improvements I really noticed are some very minor typos, instances where the gender is incorrect (I'm guessing the default is for the heir to be a girl?), and a small section where a paragraph repeats itself before the baby's gender reveal.

Overall, this is a great start to a fun interactive fiction piece!

May I just say that this game is a masterpiece! Like omg I love it so much, and the voice actors are perfect for the characterss! And their dynamic is beyond cutee! I almost hunger for more, Great work :D

This cracked me up omg xD (so true though)

Ikr they're the cutest! And whenever Lawrence shifts (well more like bounces in embarrassment lol) Vale looking over to check on him drives me nuts! It's just way too cuteeee aaaah