The game it's really good but im on a mobile device and the place where you put the control are at least uncomfortable, maybe you could put some Settings to change that or something similar, besides that the game it's really interesting.
I really like the finale 1.
The revenge is cold and the love warm, eve doesn't deserve that victory at all but help the character grow.
you wrote fire and the plot fitting pretty well.
Obra maestra 10/10