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My largest criticism/bug is that the UI is very small and the bottom 5-10% of it is cut off for me. My screen is 1080p and I am using Firefox on Linux desktop, FYI. Outside of that, I have some suggestions:

• “Hypno mode” which displays an animated spiral and custom images at user-specified rates (e.g., 2 images/second)
• Limit which lines you get based on gender (i.e., I don’t want to be called a good girl as a guy)
• More line variety (I got several repeats over a single 15m session)
• Longer or adjustable toy output; maybe also add an option to increase over time like the intensity does
• Allow user to select which toy output patterns the session will use (I would like to disable some of them)
• Make the game downloadable so it can be played offline

If it’s feasible, you might want to consider bundling some kind of open source TTS engine into the game itself if such a thing exists. The stock TTS voices aren’t a game killer, but they are a bit of a boner killer. Not a big deal though.

Finally, kudos to you for making this game, I do like it a lot and will play again even though I sound picky.

This is desperately needed! Would prefer buttplug.io integration over Lovense though so it can work with more toys.

It doesn’t really make sense to me that Vik is supposedly 26 years old while Jimmy is 40; they look like they should swap ages. Is that explained in the story?

Would love to show your mother this comment and ask her whether she’s proud of her kid’s hobby or whether she thinks you’re a pathetic no-life loser. Hopefully she’s already dead so she doesn’t have to deal with you anymore. That’s me expressing my opinion about you.

This game is so sweet. I love the attention to detail, the descriptiveness of the writing, and the customization options. All of the characters are so cute and so nice that I wanted longer scenes with all of them, even the non-romanceable characters! Sam is probably my favourite though. :3 Thanks for making this!

Played for the first time today, really fun work; I like the game-within-a-game aspect and it’s great that it doesn’t feel bolted on, it’s the focus and it shows.

Just a note that the CG for brushing Taylor’s hair near the start of the game is broken when you’ve chosen a male character with he/him pronouns, no boobs, and a vagina. The text in the scene is fine, but the visual is a “not found” error instead of the specified image.

Isn’t that the link to this page? I think you meant to post this instead: https://octiwriter.itch.io/watching-a-movie-together

FWIW I don’t own your game and I am currently able to see this page. I came here from an Itch email that actually featured this post, so Itch appears to be directing traffic to you in some way and hasn’t permanently de-indexed the game.

What’s the difference between this version and the main version? I was under the impression that there was gay content in the main version’s Master mode when choosing the male body type. Does this one just take Mistress mode and the female body type out?

Just wanted to say that I am really down with the game and I can’t wait until the next update. It really grabs you, covers a lot of bases in interesting ways, and deserves more attention!

Like I said, this is absolutely not anything I think is a mistake on your part - so it’s okay if it’s difficult/impossible to implement or hard to understand. I appreciate that you’re willing to try.

I can only speak for myself in terms of what I find acceptable, but here are some word suggestions (others may find these off-putting):

Vagina/pussy: hole, front hole, cunt (some may not like this one), boypussy/boycunt (another that some may dislike), man cave (kind of hokey)

Pussy lips/slit: lips, folds, vulva (might be too anatomical-sounding?)

Clit/bean: dick/cock, t-dick/cock, dicklet (can be used to humiliate also, if that’s relevant), nub (kind of vague but gets the job done)

For terms referring to a trans woman’s genitals, I can’t say what a trans woman might prefer since I’m not one, but here are some terms I’ve read online:

Penis/dick/cock: dick/cock (some trans women don’t care about terms that much), shaft, strap, girldick/girlcock, clit, member, hen (like a cock but for a girl lol, uncommon but catching on a bit), venus (penis but with a V, also uncommon)

Tip/head: I’m not sure if there is a specific term that trans women might prefer for this part, tbh

Balls: Again, another one I’m not sure of, but I’ve read people online sometimes use “orbs”; more info/opinions from trans women are probably needed

In general, I’ve also read that a lot of people use the words “bits” or “junk” to refer to essentially any aspect of their genitals, but that seems a bit non-specific for an erotic role-playing game.

Regarding your question: “Does this dysphoria also include when a character is talking about their own body parts? Or just the pov situation?” I would say yes - it’s pretty difficult for me to refer to my own body using conventional terms, even through text.

I totally get that this may not be possible/practical for you to do! That’s totally okay, I’m fine with a game not being tailored to me - they are a lot of work to make and you’re a solo dev. Again, I really appreciate your efforts to understand and see if this is workable. Thank you for having an open mind.

I think what Adhes is asking for is a way to specify in-game that he is a man with pecs and a vagina... but for references to the PC's vagina/clit to be customizable/trans-inclusive to reduce discomfort.

I am a trans man and I agree that this is a common request. Many of us feel uncomfortable with terms that women and other people designated female at birth are fine with.

I hope you'll consider the request. If not, I'll also have to play as a cis man, like Adhes. Nothing against you, but I wish more games that explore gender customization (the only way I can play as a character with a body that resembles my own) understood that.

Really like the game, the dev knows what they're doing with the concept.

I like the multiple endings, however I'm a pervert so I was a bit disappointed that the game ends before he takes you back to his lair. ;) In that sense I wish that there were fewer, longer endings that were more explicit.

Also, somehow I got all the endings but am missing one scene from the gallery. :(