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I've been disappointed by so many VN's, but I have to say this one was truly surprising! The story is is actually unique and coherent, the dialog is clear and flows well for the most part, the character's are real and human looking, and it's finally an adult game that isn't afraid to feature seriously adult, dark themes IF you so choose to follow that path, but offers the Role Playing options to be good if you prefer. These are all really impressive feats in this field. 

If I could offer my humble suggestions for your next game, I would say:

***SPOILERS***

The incest angle is a kink for some, but not for me and I suspect not for many others. Maybe I missed it somewhere, but I never once read that she was my step daughter until well after having arrived in the city, and that one time was so out of the blue that I don't know to believe it or if it was a typo. I know inserting the girl is part of the twisted game your boss is playing with us, but based on what I've played so far (the free content available her eon itch) it feels like it hasn't added to the story and should have been more avoidable. Plus having a family and a 'loving daughter' affects the otherwise well done roleplay options in the game. If I want to play an evil bastard from the beginning, the devoted child and regretful ex wife are out of place. Cutting the detailed backstory and waking up on the island would have cut to the chase; any needed backstory and plot could be filled in as the story unfolded, perhaps with player driven choices the way Seeds of Chaos does. 

Lean more into the badass / dominant male fantasy and realism. You offer some of this and tease it a lot, but more often then not we actually end up at the mercy of the NPCs. Multiple times we're shown a serious, competent, deadly player, and then in the next scene I'm being held at gunpoint. The most unrealistic scene imo was running into the raider queen chick who demanded sexual favors in exchange for supplies. Really? She had armed dudes at her beck and call, who are for some reason loyal to her, and she effectively SA's the player? 

Other than that, I'm really enjoying the game! Got my fingers crossed after you've wrapped this up you'll make something similar in a new setting! A Conan / Viking type warrior in a dark fantasy world going on bloody and sexy adventures!

Far as I could tell they don't on their own, but if I recall there's a button in the cheat menu that respawns them. I've also never played a single run long enough to really tell for sure. 

Love the concept! So few evil male characters out there you can play as that aren't little goblins. My key hopes/suggestions would be:

1: Focus on smoother/more realistic animations! I appreciate you're trying to throw out lots and lots of features, chambers, devices, etc, but in my humble opinion you'd be best served by hyper focusing on the key feature first - banging hot elves! As it stands, your animations have that VERY early Skyrim sex mod vibe like 'Animated Prostitution.' Games like MudBlood are VERY weak on roleplay, options, construction, etc, but the sex anims are smooth af and they're reaking in the patreon money for a reason. 

2: Enhancing the NPC capture process. Another great game i'd hope you could take inspiration from is Goblin Walker. Replacing the elves that are just chilling at the front gates with villages, towns, farms, and castles for you to raid (making your game an effective combo of Goblin Walker and Mud Blood (with a dash of Mad Island), giving us the best of these games) that have randomly generated NPCs for you to hunt, and male civilians and soldiers who actively try to stop you from carrying your prey back to your lair, would add a TON of fun to the capture part of the game. 

3. Character Customization/Options. The option to be the big orc, demon, human, dragonborne, etc would be chef's kiss. Making horns, bigger or different styles of wings, clothing, armor, accessories things you can unlock of find in the world would be awesome. 

Thank you for the hard work! Look forward to your next update!