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ptite_louise
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The world is really interesting, and the story is cute. However, I would have liked it more if we had spent more time exploring and getting to know the characters; it feels a bit rushed and makes it difficult to feel immersed in the story. The sex scenes feel totally out of place, other than the kisses. In my opinion, just keeping the kiss at the end, when Onpu is saved, as a climax, would have been better. It's also really difficult at times, and the enormous amount of monsters for no reason is silly to me.
Tl;dr: Really good concept, cute story, too short (feels rushed) and stupidly hard. Also, sex scenes feel out of place.
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