Good start and an interesting concept but with some issues
- From what I saw there is no sound in the game, you should at least add some music/background noise.
- Too many characters are introduced at the same time
- With the number of characters some form of bio/npc list is needed.
- That last point is completly subjective but it's also my biggest issue with the game. I didn't like the MC. He felt like an immature jerk. If he mature during the game I guess it's fine but as it is I would rather play as the dad ;)
The 3D art is nice and the girls generaly look good.
I hope this feedback will be usefull to you. I will definitely try the next update.