Hi! Absolutely adore this setting and your writing.
Think I ran into a few bugs,
-The first night after being brought to the other land, the dream sequence has an error:
That night you lay your head on the soft surface. It smells musky and dust fills your nose.
○ This is where the sleep ends, and the dream begins
The (elseif:) changer should be stored in a variable or attached to a hook.Macros like this should appear before a hook: (elseif: ...)[Some text]
- On the Cerca (VIP?) path, if you "Ask him about the tentacle" the choices that you are presented with all lead to an error:
You think for a while, thinking about what the tentacle did to you and feel…
I can't (go-to:) to the passage 'ConfrontHeart2_Cerca2' because it doesn't exist.
I can't (go-to:) to the passage 'ConfrontHeart2_Cerca2' because it doesn't exist.
I can't (go-to:) to the passage 'ConfrontHeart2_Cerca2' because it doesn't exist.
- When meeting up the the rebels, you're unable to press "continue" to move on to the next passage, clicking the "continue" button does nothing.
... "And not far from this point on we'll be The Rebels. And by we, I meant you're invited to join." The hand grips tight on you. Despite his signs of waning strength due to years of life, this hand and the dagger in another will not hesitate to plunge you in your guts if an answer you will give displease them.
○ Continue
- On the Cerca house servant path, after hearing Maddie doing something "weird" during the night, you're unable to sleep any night after. When you go to sleep, it looks like this, with no "sleep for the day option", hitting leave just takes you out of bed without sleeping:
You lie on the soft single bed, feeling the pillow calling you into a sleep.
○ Leave
