Hello, thank you very much. I’m currently working on Chapter 2 and I will fix everything. I’m only 14, so I can’t spend a lot of time on it because of school and daily tasks — sorry about that. I’ll definitely improve the things you mentioned. Have a nice day!
Hello, your feedback really motivated me. You’re absolutely right about everything you mentioned, and I’ll definitely fix those issues. Chapter 2 will be longer and more interesting — you can be sure of that. Have a nice day!