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isn't it awesome how if you're plural you can do toxic yuri with a girl while also doing toxic yuri with another girl inside your head at the same time

the heartfelt tone of the writing throughout the story did a great job conveying the ups and downs without feeling like too great of a lurch, and I absolutely adore the use of paper cutouts for the character sprites! the switch to nvl text when things get scary was great for selling the moment, and the shot of the hands was especially gnarly given the prior cartoony puppy paws

ohhhhhh what a fantastic story. the exploitation being laced with such genuinely touching acts of care, the fostering of obsession and alienation from one's surroundings, it made my heart do backflips and somersaults the whole time I was reading.

and bran's art heightens the sickly-sweet atmosphere of everything, with the cute faces and the blushes and the heart eyes...the torn up paper elements to the ui also support that with its scrapped together vibe. everyone did such a great job!! very well done!!

visceral and bleak and harrowingly accurate to the kind of hallucinatory thinking that sets in when left to one's own neuroses for too long. the prose was slimy and uncomfortable and had me physically recoiling from my computer screen which I'm given to understand was probably the goal so very very well done

ooooouh this had me squirming in my chair and feeling really funny feelings in my gut. really really good. I really greatly enjoyed the constantly shifting power dynamics eventually completely melting down into mutual desperation, and the shifts between the current moment and the storytelling were captivating!! also the sex was really hot. this is the kind of story that really needs the sex to be hot in order to stick the landing and I'm very glad to say that it succeeded