Enjoyed the chaos of the mission. I think a little more clarity around the intended position of the Napalm & NutriGro products could help. As currently read I could place the tokens along my opponents home board edge. I.E. they'd have to move a unit backwards, away from the objectives, to pick up the tokens. I think you want players to put them between their opponents deployment zone and the objectives so that they pick them up on the way to the middle of the board. I do like that you've created a turbo charged objective taking unit(s) for both sides. it makes part of the army a high value target. that's fun! I do not think that these should be optional rules its such a potentially big part of your scoring system.
that's fair the mission should work just fine if you wanna try it in skirmish. I picked AoF because units tend to be stickier in that system. 12 bodies last longer than a single one. because of that you'll see better round to round use of the moving objectives. a unit thats taken 7 wounds still has 5 bodies left to gather next round. thats not so true in AoF skirmish.
