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I love the story that you have so far!! its really engaging, and I can't wait to see the artwork you add to illustrate this world :)

LOOOVEEE the name input feature!!! I'm excited to see that come into play in the game! not much to comment on yet, but I think you have a good amount of choices for players to make, I'm excited to see where it goes!

I can't wait to see the further development with this!! curious- how long do you think it'll take to reach an ending? I know you've probably put so much work into what you've coded and written so far, but I can't help but wonder if you can cut some of the beginning and just cut right to "you have to move out" and going right into the city.... just a thought!!

ohhhh this is so nice and personal :) I also love the way you designed the game page?! I can't wait to see how the finished art will look with the web design!!
similar to sam, I think my biggest issue was the speed of text, or maybe the way the text was broken up? it felt like there was a lot of text and it was a bit slow to appear. I can't wait to see the direction you take this in!!