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I loooove the idea of  this being a demented chatbox sim. That's really interesting! And all the different typing styles are lovely to see too, it brings me back to my time frequenting the deviantArt chats around 2016/17. Which is to say, the Wild West. >~> But I mean that in a good way!

Only complaint I really have is the rapidfire pacing of the text messages themselves, though I can understand why you'd opt to display them that way, as getting good timing in Twine is so hard, honestly. That being said, this is a lovely first Twine game! Good job! 

A big cookie for sure. Yum !!!!!!

I love the colors just gushing out of it, haha. Nice! :>

I love how the most effort put in here went straight to the food puns. This is a really charming game, I ended up loving the quest system a lot :>  Nice job!

Thank you so much!!! :> 

I'm seriously into the visuals of all of these pages. I ended up staring at a lot of them longer than I thought I would, haha. I also love how none of these seem the same aside from a few color similarities here and there — it gives every page its own unique edge, and tearing my eyes over or flipping the page just seemed to hit me with a completely different scene to marvel at. This was really cool!!! :O

Gosh, this is sooo interesting! The concept behind this is really cool, and I'd honestly love to see more! The visuals; you absolutely captured that old Nintendo 3Ds look to a tee, and the whole zine left me wanting a lot more, to be honest.  Good job! :>

Echoing what a lot of others have said, this is a really interesting zine! It really does remind me of a hard, sudden glitch that catches you off-guard or just, as you put it best, a broken printer. The inner-front, page 2, and the back are my favorites. You did a great job with this! 

Gosh, the imagery is so nuts here; I love it! I can tell you really had a lot of fun tinkering around with the Electric Zine Maker, haha. :> 

This is super cool! The visuals really help emphasize the chaotic questions the writing tries to evoke.

Hi!! I'm sorry for the late reply, but thank you so so so much for taking the time out of your day to comment how you think there's room for improvement in my work! I really appreciate the words of constructive criticism and encouragement! I'll definitely keep your words in mind the next time I make a VN. :"0 Thank you so much, again! :>

I had a lot of fun with this game, even though it was so short! It raised a lot of questions and fear, which was a good thing in my book. I love Horror that allows the readers imagination to run wild. The fact you did so this effectively in such a short time frame is amazing. Good job! :>

Thank you so much for the honest feedback! I seriously appreciate you taking the time out of your day to play my game and give me a review! I'll definitely put the credits in there sometime soon — I'd hate to go without giving such an amazing person like renpytom credit! :"0 Thank you so much again for the review, again! \3V3/

This was a very short and simple game, but I enjoyed every second of it! I loved the punchline at the end, haha. Good luck with the Slime Game Jam! :>