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Can't forget Skyclay, where clay grows high in trees.

Dayum...

Never thought abt it like that XD

XD


Accurate tho

BABEH

Say yes and cheat on em >:3

Yuh

Nice comeback (Not meant to be sarcastic)

He did, however, kill a LOT of cats, or a lot of cats died under his command.

I found a bug where, if sleeping in the nursery, if paused, not at night, if you push the red button, all the other selectable morphs (I think?) show up as sleeping kits, and if I push the unpause button, I can't do anything. I can exit the den, but my keyboard doesn't work. That may be something on my end, idk. Thought I'd put this up tho.

No worries!

You have to battle train more- the more you train, the more health and strength you get.

>:3

You after getting 9 lives:
Welp, guess I Better go fight Firestar now.

Firestar: I'm the dude who killed 50% of his clan!
You: Kills him in 2 hits

Uhm~ I was talking to Webbedfoot, and I died previously, was reborn, and in my past life had a bird. I talked to him to try get a pet in this life, and he asked to release my bird. I said yes, and now I'm stuck in the elder's den, and can't interact with anything.

Hey Mossy! I don't know if you'll see this, but thank you for making it so you can ask Breezepaw to be your mate when she's an apprentice. And overall, I love how you've added LGBTQ+ things. I'm a lesbian myself, so it just makes me so happy. Thank you so much for making this game!

Pik4corn

This is just a piece of fan-fic writing, but I'm hoping to write my own book series.

This is really good, but I do have a few bits of feedback.

1. Check your capital letters are in the right place, and you need to make sure your puntulization is accurate as well. For example, one of the sentances that stood out to me most for needing more capitalization is this one:

“It’s Greystripe he's dead!” The one behind him was dangling a limp body from his jaws. "We'll deal with it later for now!"
"Who are you?" The spotted one one said, thrusting herself through the commotion.

The letters and puntuation in bold and italics are the ones I have added in/fixed. Please double check your writing!

2. I know I didn't use them, but I reckon that this piece of writing would be much more fluent if you added paragaphs.

3. You have written a character's name two different ways;
Graystripe
Greystripe

I reckon you should choose one spelling of it, as neither are incorrect, but it would be easu\ier to follow if they were the same.

That's all of my feedback. This is a really cool piece of writing, but it can be improved. Continue working on it, and maybe you could make it into a book!

Keep Writing!
-Pik4corn

Did you make this yourself? It's beautiful!

MOSSY! I'm SO GLAD you're ok!

So happy you can post again Mossy!

Thank you for that! I did, and I'm working on making it better and longer. I'll see if I cna post a updated version soon!

My bad

What white thing?

I mean how when you go to Starclan (Or I assume any other afterlife clan) You can get killed again.For example, Spottedleaf. She was killed again in the battle against the dark forest. So, theoretically, The Tribe of endless Hunting's name isn't actually correct, because if another cat kills you again, you kinda dissapear into nothingness.

Mossy scratch acc got banned, so I think she can't update it anymore

Why was she banned anyway?

You can also save her by becoming mates

your lucky anyone was there XD I was unfortunately not so lucky

Really? you should check out the official Warriors website then. People submit some AWESOME fanart - not saying this drawing isn't cool. It's frikin awesome!

Also, do we even know that the name of the group(s) that live theres ancestors CALLED starclan? I mean, it could be called something else, just how The Tribe of Falling Water calls their ancestors The Tribe of Endless Hunting ( *SPOILER ALERT* Which we now know is kinda incorrect thanks to The Last Hope. RIP Spottedleaf) So, yeah.

Will do!

Didn't Mossy get banned though?

I think because the cold stone was blocked off, maybe Bramblestar thought the connection was cut off? Just a theory though.

Ok, thank you for this amazing information. I will keep this in mind while writing my fan-fic, or maybe even my own stories one day!

Thank you! I would love some advice for my story, I will consider any advice you give me.

Thank you!

Maybe we're dreaming about our dead sister?

I also have a plan for Skyclan.

Leader: Wrenstar - Calico she-cat with blue eyes

Personality: Wise, Observant, Responsible, Feisty.

Deputy: Owlflight - Tabby tom with amber eyes. Long chest scar.

Personality: Kind, Loyal, Brave, Battle-worn and Intelligent.

Med Cat: Moonsight -  Brown + white + freckles. She-cat with blue eyes.

Personality: Wise, Loyal, Caring. Connected strongly with starclan.

Med App: None

Warriors

Leopardspirit - She-cat - Bengal - Green eyes.

-Kind

-Smart

-Honest

Brokenclaw - Tom - Black pelt White paws - Amber eyes. 

-Evil

-Envious

-Hateful

Cloudwhisper - She-cat - White - Blue eyes

-Kind

-Cheerful

-Jolly

Mistfeather - She-cat - White - Grey - Green eyes - Moonsight’s sister

-Proud

-Boastful

Blackice - Tom - Tabby- Amber eyes

-Brave

-Honest

-Annoying

Silentwing - Tom - White with grey swirls - Green eyes

-Brave

-Proud

-Hard working

Fernstorm - She-cat - White + Brown - Blue eyes - Mistfeather’s sister

-Jealous

-Cunning

-Secretive

Nightcall - She-cat - Black with white spots on paws + face - Blue eyes

-Honest

-Smart

-Loyal

Queens

Sunflower - Orange + white - Blue eyes - Mate: Silentwing

Kits: Maplekit, Foxkit and Ghostkit - 4 moons

Jayleaf - Grey - Orange eyes - Mate: Blackice

Kits: Expecting - 0 moons

Fallentree - Brown with multi coloured spots that look like the sun coming through a tree canopy - Green eyes - Mate: Lostwhisper

Kits: Deerkit and Treekit - 5.5 moons

Apprentices

Pinepaw - She-cat - Brown - Green eyes

-Snobby

-Oldest

-Mean

Ferretpaw - Tom - Slim - Tabby- Blue eyes

-Mean

-Pinepaw’s sister

-Bullies Blizzardpaw with Pinepaw

-Bullied into being mean ~But shh, that's a secret~

Blizzardpaw - She-cat - White + Blueish-Grey markings - Light blue eyes

-Bullied

-Brave

-Smart   

-Main character

Flintpaw - Tom - Gray + Black - Blue eyes

-Likes Blizzardpaw

-Kind

-Smart

-Stands up for Blizzardpaw

Elders

Lostwhisper-  Tom - Smoky Grey - Blind

-Hardworking

-Doubtful

-Resilient

-Had to retire early due to being blinded by a defending his mate from a fox

Callingsong - She-cat - Tabby - Half blind - Blue eyes

-Snappy

-Demanding

-Funny

Cinderspeckle - She-cat - White with grey speckles - Broken leg

-Tells stories the most

-Wise

-Gentle

I think it was made on Picrew.

How long have you stayed in the nursery?