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Say yes and cheat on em >:3

Yuh

Nice comeback (Not meant to be sarcastic)

He did, however, kill a LOT of cats, or a lot of cats died under his command.

I found a bug where, if sleeping in the nursery, if paused, not at night, if you push the red button, all the other selectable morphs (I think?) show up as sleeping kits, and if I push the unpause button, I can't do anything. I can exit the den, but my keyboard doesn't work. That may be something on my end, idk. Thought I'd put this up tho.

No worries!

You have to battle train more- the more you train, the more health and strength you get.

>:3

You after getting 9 lives:
Welp, guess I Better go fight Firestar now.

Firestar: I'm the dude who killed 50% of his clan!
You: Kills him in 2 hits

Uhm~ I was talking to Webbedfoot, and I died previously, was reborn, and in my past life had a bird. I talked to him to try get a pet in this life, and he asked to release my bird. I said yes, and now I'm stuck in the elder's den, and can't interact with anything.

Hey Mossy! I don't know if you'll see this, but thank you for making it so you can ask Breezepaw to be your mate when she's an apprentice. And overall, I love how you've added LGBTQ+ things. I'm a lesbian myself, so it just makes me so happy. Thank you so much for making this game!

Pik4corn

This is just a piece of fan-fic writing, but I'm hoping to write my own book series.

This is really good, but I do have a few bits of feedback.

1. Check your capital letters are in the right place, and you need to make sure your puntulization is accurate as well. For example, one of the sentances that stood out to me most for needing more capitalization is this one:

“It’s Greystripe he's dead!” The one behind him was dangling a limp body from his jaws. "We'll deal with it later for now!"
"Who are you?" The spotted one one said, thrusting herself through the commotion.

The letters and puntuation in bold and italics are the ones I have added in/fixed. Please double check your writing!

2. I know I didn't use them, but I reckon that this piece of writing would be much more fluent if you added paragaphs.

3. You have written a character's name two different ways;
Graystripe
Greystripe

I reckon you should choose one spelling of it, as neither are incorrect, but it would be easu\ier to follow if they were the same.

That's all of my feedback. This is a really cool piece of writing, but it can be improved. Continue working on it, and maybe you could make it into a book!

Keep Writing!
-Pik4corn

Did you make this yourself? It's beautiful!

MOSSY! I'm SO GLAD you're ok!

So happy you can post again Mossy!

Thank you for that! I did, and I'm working on making it better and longer. I'll see if I cna post a updated version soon!

My bad

What white thing?

I mean how when you go to Starclan (Or I assume any other afterlife clan) You can get killed again.For example, Spottedleaf. She was killed again in the battle against the dark forest. So, theoretically, The Tribe of endless Hunting's name isn't actually correct, because if another cat kills you again, you kinda dissapear into nothingness.

Mossy scratch acc got banned, so I think she can't update it anymore

Why was she banned anyway?

You can also save her by becoming mates

your lucky anyone was there XD I was unfortunately not so lucky

Really? you should check out the official Warriors website then. People submit some AWESOME fanart - not saying this drawing isn't cool. It's frikin awesome!

Also, do we even know that the name of the group(s) that live theres ancestors CALLED starclan? I mean, it could be called something else, just how The Tribe of Falling Water calls their ancestors The Tribe of Endless Hunting ( *SPOILER ALERT* Which we now know is kinda incorrect thanks to The Last Hope. RIP Spottedleaf) So, yeah.

Will do!

Didn't Mossy get banned though?

I think because the cold stone was blocked off, maybe Bramblestar thought the connection was cut off? Just a theory though.

Ok, thank you for this amazing information. I will keep this in mind while writing my fan-fic, or maybe even my own stories one day!

Thank you! I would love some advice for my story, I will consider any advice you give me.

Thank you!

Maybe we're dreaming about our dead sister?

I also have a plan for Skyclan.

Leader: Wrenstar - Calico she-cat with blue eyes

Personality: Wise, Observant, Responsible, Feisty.

Deputy: Owlflight - Tabby tom with amber eyes. Long chest scar.

Personality: Kind, Loyal, Brave, Battle-worn and Intelligent.

Med Cat: Moonsight -  Brown + white + freckles. She-cat with blue eyes.

Personality: Wise, Loyal, Caring. Connected strongly with starclan.

Med App: None

Warriors

Leopardspirit - She-cat - Bengal - Green eyes.

-Kind

-Smart

-Honest

Brokenclaw - Tom - Black pelt White paws - Amber eyes. 

-Evil

-Envious

-Hateful

Cloudwhisper - She-cat - White - Blue eyes

-Kind

-Cheerful

-Jolly

Mistfeather - She-cat - White - Grey - Green eyes - Moonsight’s sister

-Proud

-Boastful

Blackice - Tom - Tabby- Amber eyes

-Brave

-Honest

-Annoying

Silentwing - Tom - White with grey swirls - Green eyes

-Brave

-Proud

-Hard working

Fernstorm - She-cat - White + Brown - Blue eyes - Mistfeather’s sister

-Jealous

-Cunning

-Secretive

Nightcall - She-cat - Black with white spots on paws + face - Blue eyes

-Honest

-Smart

-Loyal

Queens

Sunflower - Orange + white - Blue eyes - Mate: Silentwing

Kits: Maplekit, Foxkit and Ghostkit - 4 moons

Jayleaf - Grey - Orange eyes - Mate: Blackice

Kits: Expecting - 0 moons

Fallentree - Brown with multi coloured spots that look like the sun coming through a tree canopy - Green eyes - Mate: Lostwhisper

Kits: Deerkit and Treekit - 5.5 moons

Apprentices

Pinepaw - She-cat - Brown - Green eyes

-Snobby

-Oldest

-Mean

Ferretpaw - Tom - Slim - Tabby- Blue eyes

-Mean

-Pinepaw’s sister

-Bullies Blizzardpaw with Pinepaw

-Bullied into being mean ~But shh, that's a secret~

Blizzardpaw - She-cat - White + Blueish-Grey markings - Light blue eyes

-Bullied

-Brave

-Smart   

-Main character

Flintpaw - Tom - Gray + Black - Blue eyes

-Likes Blizzardpaw

-Kind

-Smart

-Stands up for Blizzardpaw

Elders

Lostwhisper-  Tom - Smoky Grey - Blind

-Hardworking

-Doubtful

-Resilient

-Had to retire early due to being blinded by a defending his mate from a fox

Callingsong - She-cat - Tabby - Half blind - Blue eyes

-Snappy

-Demanding

-Funny

Cinderspeckle - She-cat - White with grey speckles - Broken leg

-Tells stories the most

-Wise

-Gentle

I think it was made on Picrew.

How long have you stayed in the nursery?

I wrote a Warriors lake-side story. It's unfinished, so this is just the prologue. I'm also new to this community, but I'm a huge Warriors fan! I would love any feedback about my story!

The ground shook as a large group of cats raced past, sending a mouse scuttling into its hole. Starlight shone from above, making the gold and amber leaf-covered ground light enough to see easily. A group of cats all sizes and colours burst out of a bush. At the head of the group was a tall calico she-cat. The group of cats raced through the forest, narrowly avoiding trees, rocks and bushes. The group of cats slowed to a stop once they were about a tail length from a big, glistening lake with a little island in the middle, with a tree that had fallen over, making a bridge to the island. The she-cat angled her ears towards the island. She could hear the chattering of many cats. Mixed cat scents wafted towards her as she parted her mouth. The she turned to the fallen tree and started sprinting across the tree. It was slippery, but the she-cat managed to race across it with the large group of cats right behind her. The she-cat leapt off the bridge, barely touching the ground with her paws, then springing over the bushes that surrounded the island. She landed on the ground with a thump, making dust fly up around her. There were more cats on the island. They turned to look at her as her warriors started appearing from the bushes. “Show-off.” Purred a muscular Tom as he strode towards her. By now the rest of the cats had gone back to talking to each other. “Hardly the best I can do in Owlflight.” She replied as she strutted towards an old, moss-covered tree, sitting in the middle of the clearing. The leaves were swirling down, caught on a frosty leaf-fall breeze. Four cats were sitting on it. “You’re late Wrenstar,” grumbled a grey tom with yellow eyes. “As always.” He finished. “You’re late too sometimes, Stonestar,” Wrenstar replied, staring at him with her crystal blue eyes. Stonestar muttered something under his breath that Wrenstar couldn’t catch. Wrenstar nodded greetings to the three other cats on the tree, Birchstar, leader of Windclan, a slender tortie tom, Fallingstar, leader of Riverclan, a sleek grey she-cat, and Eaglestar, leader of Thunderclan, a muscular Brown and white tom, as she leapt onto a branch, slightly lower than the rest. The full moon shone down on the clearing, their warrior ancestors watching them. “Shall we begin?” Stonestar impatiently asked. “Very well,” Birchstar replied. Wrenstar let out a loud caterwaul, gathering the cat's attention. Wrenstar stood up, digging her claws into the branch she had been sitting on to balance herself. “Cats of the clans,” She began, “I am sad to inform you that Mistystar is dead, and as her deputy, I have taken her place as clan leader. My deputy is Owlflight. I have been to the Moonpool and received my nine lives and name from Starclan.” There were a few gasps of shock and murmurs as cats talked to each other in the clearing below. Wrenstar couldn’t quite make out the voices below. “Her clan grieves for her.” She finished solemnly. Her eyes welled up with tears as she thought about her leader, clanmate, and best friend. Wrenstar’s hair stood on end as out of the corner of her eye, she saw Stone Star smirking softly. Did he think she was weak for caring? Stupid Mouse-brain, She thought to herself Stonestar would never intend to harm Skyclan, or any clan! Would he?... She left her thoughts there, as Stonestar stood up, announcing “Shadowclan is stronger than ever. Prey is plentiful in the marsh, and no cat in Shadowclan will go hungry.” His eyes darted to Wrenstar. Was he… challenging her?

- I also need to add paragraphs