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Viability - The game is playable, although the images don't wanna work but it's a work in progress so it's not important at the moment.

Presentation - The game makes sense, and the story is conveyed clearly.

Theme - The narrative is really interesting. As I click through the story I like learning more.  I'm excited to see the mystery unveiled and learn about the deal with that boomboomber325 guy.

Engagement - I was engaged with the story the whole time. I liked replaying the story to to see the endings. I'm looking forward to see what how the story keeps going! :)

-Luna

Viability - The game is playable and is polished. 

Presentation - The game is easy to understand, the gameplay is very much visual novel so there isn't too much confusion of how to play and you just keep clicking along reading the story.

Theme - The text and black screen really plays into the "online" feel and almost basement dweller vibes. I already enjoy the visuals of the game without full blown illustrations so I'm very excited to see how it'll turn out with them implemented.

Engagement - The game is very engaging. I enjoyed rage baiting the computer(?) by continuously writing the wrong name and the text messages felt real and I enjoyed reading through them!

- Luna

Viability - This game is really viable. It feels very polished. I would like to make the suggestion that you could make a restart from other certain parts of the game. It was a little frustrating when I miserably fail at the picking the ingredients  and I have to start way before and re pick my decisions to get back at the point where I lost. A nice choice to have a replay feature so that the player can get different endings. :)

Presentation - The game is easy to understand. 

Theme - I enjoy the colors and the illustrations, they really showcase the feeling of anxiety while trying to order a sandwich from a sandwich shop.

Engagement - I was engaged the whole time. The text was funny and relatable, and the parts of the game when the player has to pick options in a certain time frame was fun. Again, I would suggest adding a restart from those parts of the game as it's frustrating to go click through all the choices to get back to that part of the game. 

Very fun game :)

-Luna

Viability - There is some parts of the game where it just ends on a blank screen, but it's most likely that the game isn't finished. I would also recommend a restart button whenever you win or lose since there is so much different variables in the game and some players would like to replay the game to get different endings.

Presentation - The game is presented well, I didn't feel lost while playing and the role-playing aspect is strong.

Theme - I enjoy the narrative a lot and I enjoy the way the story is written, it feels like a story book or legend. The colors and text are really effective as well. 

Engagement - I was engaged with the story and I really liked the personalized stories for each role :)

-Luna