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Progress the story.  The fairies (plural) get more attention.  One eventually hangs out in your room.

I understand that the goal is to get laid.. this is a Hentai fantasy after all.  So it is a matter of the main character putting up with whatever they must to accomplish this.  I also understand that you must try to write the characters as close as possible to how they are presented in their source materials as possible.

It would make more sense if the main character could "break" Asuka, possibly turning her into a dependant sub.  He has only known his stepsister for the duration of the story, thus he has only known her to be abusive and manipulative.  Nothing (even the tub scene) shows her to be redeemable.  Nothing has occurred to show he would ever have reason to care for her.  She only uses sex as a method of control as opposed to actual intimacy that might suggest the possibility of redemption.  This would be magnified by the fact that he knows she is a fictional character and only code that could be re-written to become a better "person".

There might also be a potential path available for change, if one looks to Jessica Rabbit.. to paraphrase, she isn't bad, she's just written that way.  But she would have to not only accept that the simulation is a lie, but that Everything she knows about herself is only fiction.. there was no father to leave her, no giant mechs to pilot, none of her previous experiences ever having happened.  This would essentially kill the personality known as Asuka Langley leaving her a blank slate with red hair and language skills.

Just my opinions.

Too many bugged tasks.  You gain no money the first time you shoot drones for Rebecca regardless of the scene showing cash being handed over.  Also earning money with Rebecca can be started in the morning, and takes two time slots while earning in the afternoon only takes one.  Also you shoot drones indefinitely after the introductory session of having to only shoot 6... and yes I know you can just skip shooting any to still get paid.  Also if you earn another $400 after purchasing the dress and giving it to your "stepsister" the task resets forcing you to purchase and give it to her again.  Also if you go to class on Monday after getting the assignment and working on it, the task gets reset and you have to do it again.  Also, you get the task to go to the kitchen on Saturday morning on Saturday night.  Then, when you sleep on Monday night you get introduced to the Nexus and wake up on Sunday morning.

And the character of Asuka is written to be so abusive and deeply narcissistic, that I cannot accept how the main character would have any interest in freeing that artificial intelligence from the simulation.  All I want to do is get a weapon from Rebecca to put a bullet in Asuka's head.  There is no reasonable resolution to that level of narcissism, not without serious psychotherapy, pharmaceuticals, and shock therapy.  The idea that the main character is willing to put up with it just for the sake of freeing some AI code makes no sense. 

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