I love the hell out of this game! I do have one bug to let you know about: Beating the game and starting over causes the game to glitch out. Otherwise, I love it!
I'm struggling with the game? I can get the little girl to say eye emoji, and the old lady to say sun, the woman by the field to say me, and the guy to say house. But I can't get past there?
I'm about to play a oneshot of this because of MK and I need you to know you are the funniest motherfucker ever invented. The pregame notes are hysterical, topical, and very readable. The gameplay is easy to follow, the playbooks themselves are attacks very personally on me and the people I know, and this game is about to become my new hyperfixation for the next couple months. XDD
This is a really fun and hot game! As much as the completionist in me wishes I could explore all avenues, I really enjoy the way the paths move and allow the player some control, but not TOO much!
I really loved this VN! I actually clicked on it because it had a black lady on the display image (I'm black myself). I love the text and descriptions, the emotions and the kink--it was all very good!
And, since you asked for constructive criticism: I got a little confused by the narration perspective at the beginning. It might be helpful to have the girls use each other's names a little bit more in the beginning, to more firmly cement the narrative perspective, so I know who's holding whom and who's tightening their grip on whom.
Also, I REALLY liked that I could play it in-browser, without having to download it!
I really enjoyed this. I kinda wish we ever found out what's Ella's deal, but even without that, I really loved it. It's quiet, poignant and just very beautiful. I got ending 3 first because I'm a monsterlover, lol.
A friend recommended this game to me, and I was specifically interested in the twine version, though I did read the PDF versions first, and thought they spoiled me for the twine version, but they SUPER didn't, and the twine version is so good, I have played every route, clicked every link, I want to eat your words, they are so good, this is literally everything I have ever wanted to see exist in the world, like you? YOU GET IT.
I just played this game and it made me saaaaaaaaaaaaad! (It's very good and was very fun and I liked it a lot, but also, we didn't use our anomalies like we should have.)
Gosh, this is LOVELY! I love how flustered the boys got when you flirt with them and the way the music STOPS when Elias shows up? Delightful. All of your characters are delightful, Tim is a wonderful guide and a lovely troll, and I like how Elias doesn't take a no for an answer, he's SUCH a creep, I love him!
