This is great. It seems like it could use copy-editing. There are little mistakes, but there are also places that show signs of not quite communicating the intended idea. An outside eye who has a good idea of what is trying to be communicated can be very helpful. I love some of the hinted at lore, and the art is looking top notch. Great work!
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