I think the writing was very solid on this one, and the length of the game is very impressive for the game jam itself! What I didn't like that much was two things that maybe I just didn't understand or catch too well:
- I decided to hang out with Ainsley (I think I remember her name right) and immediately got a chance to kiss her. I didn't really remember her from previous events - maybe it was because of my choices - so I had no idea what's the source of my sudden affection!
- I got the feeling that the first choice of the cards doesn't matter too much, as it's the second that actually seals our fate, right?
Besides of those, I enjoyed the game and had good time with it :)