I usually rarely comment, but I feel the need to drop a few words. First of all, unlike most Ren'py games comprised of illusion studio game for graphic, this game feels very polished. The developer takes a lot of extra steps to make this game stands out, things like but not limited to :
Animations for NOT ONLY 18+ scenes, but also cutscenes and other story elements
A customized menu
Texts flourish to further emphasize the dialogue and make them more 'alive' (Little things like making them bigger and smaller, etc. The dev explains it best when you boot up a new game
All of these already makes them game very appealing visually, and helps it stands out among the others. I hope this features are kept for future updates. Good job!
The writing so far is also great. It doesn't feel immature or forced, it's enjoyable, written with tact, and leaves the reader rooms for imagination and deduction while still being concise on what the reader needs to know.
There is quite a lot of femdom content for now, but personally I enjoy and prefer them so that's not really a negative, more of a positive for me.
Overall, I feel like this game is full of potential, and is made by someone who would go the extra length to bring out the best in their craft (at least for now). Hope you can keep the ball rolling Cibbon, and best of luck!
