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enjoyed the story but having the theme read out to audience especially as the end weakens the adherence to theme

not very smart. not sure what's going on at the end. the axolotls kidnap people then make them walk stairs and chant mekah. please explain for my smooth brain.

fun story with fun characters were a handful of typos you might want to go over

I found the allusions to romeo and juliet a fun nod to us drama nerds, yet you still kept it fresh and unique creating a completely different story. the more i reread the less it is like the play. idk tho