Hello, thank you for your comment.
Regarding the language issues, I can review all those points. Some sections of the game are being redone, so I've chosen for now to not focus on them since they will be recreated. However, I commit to looking at everything that seems off from the moment in the game that won't undergo a rework.
I will also check why escape characters for special characters are appearing in the text. This is more technical; when you have text like
"My name is "Old hiccup"" that includes quotes within quotes, it would cause an error in the game, so you use an escape character to prevent this error, and the escape is \ normally , but it shouldn't appear in the text, so I will fix this.
About the jokes, they usually only make sense when you are in the context of what's happening. If you're out of context, they really don't make sense. I indeed went a bit overboard with the fourth-wall breaking moment in the text, and it was changed in a future version of the game that isn't open to the public. I also reviewed several jokes that would only work in my context or country, and I'm trying to avoid these playful moments in the game, focusing only on the story and leaving the "jokes" just for something that happens within the game, discarding what happens in the environment outside the game.
Once again, thank you for taking the time to write this to me. I'm glad you appreciated the effort we're putting into the work, and we just want to continue doing so.